Since the late 20th century, the Internet has revolutionized our lives. The Internet has become a significant factor in (the) economic and cultural development and constitutes the globalization. Also, there is no doubt the Internet affected our lives, for better, and for worse.
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As I mentioned before, the Internet has quite a lot of advantages. On the one hand, it contributes the advanced human(phr.) in many ways. It allows us, the human being(s), accessible sources of information, which helps our education. In addition, it is used as an easy way of modern communication, because people can talk by computer, by immediately(ww.) messages. Moreover, for the business people between(ww. - among) us, it is excellent for an accessible(phr.) work at home.
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On the other hand, however, the Internet has a few disadvantages. There are a lot of dangers, especially for children, such as uncontrolled material, dangerous people who try to tempt innocent children (pedophiles), etc. In addition, teenagers mainly, waste their time sitting in front of the computer, instead of doing sport activity(gr. - use the plural form), meeting friends, and studying. They are just sitting(gr.) in front of computer, activating their fingers mainly. In addition, is harm(gr.) their social abilities beacause they do not see their friends face to face, they do not talk to them directly.
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On the other hand, however, the Internet has a few disadvantages. There are a lot of dangers, especially for children, such as uncontrolled material, dangerous people who try to tempt innocent children (pedophiles), etc. In addition, teenagers mainly, waste their time sitting in front of the computer, instead of doing sport activity(gr. - use the plural form), meeting friends, and studying. They are just sitting(gr.) in front of computer, activating their fingers mainly. In addition, is harm(gr.) their social abilities beacause they do not see their friends face to face, they do not talk to them directly.
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In conclusion, we can say the Internet has changed our lives in both a positive and a negative way. Inspite of the risks I have mentioned before, I think that the Internet is a positive invention, that helps us a lot in this technologic generation. Moreover, in my opinion, we can still fix the situation and take care of the children using the internet, by blocking the entrance to inappropriate sites.
In conclusion, we can say the Internet has changed our lives in both a positive and a negative way. Inspite of the risks I have mentioned before, I think that the Internet is a positive invention, that helps us a lot in this technologic generation. Moreover, in my opinion, we can still fix the situation and take care of the children using the internet, by blocking the entrance to inappropriate sites.
This is better.
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Daphna
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